I rather liked it. In a morbid, sadistic, weird kind of way. :)
Word of advice. I noticed the drawings you made for when the characters spoke. If you were to animate the entire character (instead of sprites) the effect would be a lot better. You can draw the characters fine. If you feel that you can do more than just that, then i suggest a fully animted series. Give it a try :)
Overall, this one's not bad. Some cliche parts, but seems alright. Keep up the good work.
Improvements can be made..
Make it longer. Take the time to actually animate the characters; I hate seeing people get lazy and just move a giant piece of sprite .. Move SOMETHING.
Try different angles. Makes things interesting.
I kept calling you and asshole as the damn distractions came out lmao.
Only got to 40 seconds. Nicely done, maybe add more modes, or perhaps sounds.
Lots of potential in this one :) keep working on it.
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